Mark the past paper

For the first one I couldn't read it clearly. So skip to the other one .Nara's!!!

Question One:

Let's see Part A, I gave her 1 mark.because she didn't tell us what is secondary research.

Part B, I gave her 1 mark because she didn't say it is a planning of income for a business .

Part C, no mark for this one I think, because what did she write is not the answer to this question ,the question is asking the characteristics of a entrepreneur as Paul Stamp.So will should answer the characteristics of a entrepreneur .That should be something like innovation, risk taking ,determination, relevant skill and expertise....but what she write is nothing close I think... So in my opinion no mark for this question

Then Part D, 2 mark she talked about why Paul should have the secondary research .

Part E 10 mark there is no calculate wrong.

Question two:

Part A,I gave her 2 mark.Because she had mentioned the cost of the cost of buy a new premise and also she said about the population is important but both of them she didn't talk much . She also need to say something like the fund for purchase and also should say something about the customs . And the competitors ...

Part B ,3 mark She had mentioned there will be a limited liabilities if he become a partnership company .And also she said Paul can get more ideas and she has mentioned about the finance but nothing else . So she didn't say the conclusion and advantages and disadvantages which is poor.

Part C,2 mark because she didn't answer about how the primary research and secondary research helps the business.
There fore totally she has 21 mark for this past paper. Just in my opinion.